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The Risk/Reward Matrix – Excerpt #1

March 2, 2011 in The Risk/Reward Matrix, Writing by Michael

The following is an except from “The Risk/Reward Matrix”, the novel I’m in the process of writing.  It’s still in the raw, and there’s no context for it yet:  You’ll just have to wait a while until it gets published.

“I need you to bring her back,” Karl asked.  “She’s the only one left.”

He had come to Armstrong, to the only person he knew who could handle this task discreetly, and more importantly, for nothing upfront.  He wasn’t taking chances:  Accessing his accounts would almost certainly get him tagged and targeted.   He had to rely on his natural charm and whatever goodwill he’d accumulated in his short career.

Now, he stood before a semi-circle of modules, panels and displays, waiting for Sade to finish the initialization sequence.  He’d met the tall, blonde woman three years ago, the same night he’d met Liz.  The two made quite a pair, and had known each other for a while at that point.  Liz, the dark haired, sarcastic waif, and Sade, the free spirited amazon.  Ram was convinced they were a couple, but Karl wasn’t ever really sure and didn’t care enough to ask.  They’d met at the Low Bid, a scavenger hangout on the lower levels, and struck up a conversation about the merits of hiking boots.  Of all things.

“I’m worried about the condition of this disc,” Sade said, holding the small, shiny device close to her left eye.  The implant there was obvious, especially in low light like this, where the bluish iris seemed to sparkle.  “It might work, but we should get a better copy.”

Karl looked away, at a row of Russian made processors with blinking indicator lights.  “Yes, about that,” He started.  Sade interrupted.

“Don’t say this is the only one.”

“Unfortunately, yes.  That’s the only one I know of,” Karl said.  He felt guilty.  “There may be another one, but it would be in a Tantawi research lab on Mars.”

There was a momentary silence, filled by the whispers of processor coolants and the dull thump of the rhythm of the music upstairs.

“Initialization complete,” the computer reported.  Karl turned to watch Sade, but she was staring at him, shaking her head ever so slightly.

“Look, we all agreed to this job,” Karl said quickly, trying to explain.  “It sounded simple, and paid a lot.”

“You should have seen that for what it was.”

Karl nodded, and looked away from her stare.  “I know that,” he said, almost choking on the regret and shame he felt.  “Now.”  He could feel the tears, and fought the urge to sob.

He sensed Sade watching him, but couldn’t say more.  In a few moments, she turned back to the system, popped open data sleeve, and pushed the disc into it.

“I’ll have the system run a diagnostic first,” she said, her own voice cracking a bit.  “If there are data errors, they may be repairable.”  She spoke to the computer, giving it specific instructions on the procedures she wanted it to run.  “None of this,” she said, gesturing to the bank of electronics before he, “is anywhere close to state-of-the-art.  I’ve had to pull bits and pieces together from wherever I can get them.  My instructors would be horrified if they saw this rig.”

She grabbed a chair from under the console and shoved it in Karl’s direction.  Karl sat.  She opened a cabinet, and took out a tall, brown bottle and two shot glasses, offering one to Karl.  Filled it for him, then filled her own.  And then she sat.

“Instructors?” he asked.  He knew almost nothing about Sade.

“At the Cybernetic Defense Academy,” she said.

“Moscow,” Karl said, “right?”

“How do you know that?,” Sade wanted to know.  “You’re from Mars, aren’t you?”  She drained her shot glass and poured herself another.

“Earth by Birth,” he said repeating a well known catchphrase.  He drained the shot glass, and nearly choked as the alcohol burned his throat.  An aftertaste of cinnamon and vanilla.  “I studied the Fall in school,” he said when he had recovered.  “You guys wound up fighting the AI systems you’d designed.”

“Not me, thank God,” she said, leaning back, rocking.  “I was just a technician.  It’s kind of ironic, because that’s where I met Liz.”

Karl was surprised:  “She was CDA?” he asked.

“No, military,” Sade said.  She got up and poured another shot for Karl.  “A pilot, of course.  We put her back online when she was shot down.”

This was all news to Karl.

“Shot down?  When was this?” he asked as Sade put the bottle down and checked on the progress of the computer.

“There are errors, but it looks like most of them can be repaired.  Should be just a few more minutes,” she said.  She sat back down, and held up the shot glass to savor the aroma.  “That was, twelve years ago, I think.  It was early in the evacuation, first or second stage probably.   I don’t know if they ever did find out what hit her.  We were on the verge of losing control of the air at that point.”

“To the machines?”

Sade nodded, and downed the shot.  She grimaced when it hit her, then smiled.  “Good stuff, eh?”  she asked.  “Local, but it does fine by me.  Another?”

“No,” Karl said.  “I’m not built for the hard stuff.”  He pat his chest and smiled.

“Off-the-rack, eh?” she said, looking him over like a consumer.  “But custom sculpture on the face.  Anything else?”

Karl ran one hand over his face.  “This was all I could afford, this time out.  Tantawi has my customized morph.”  With that grim thought, he downed the contents of the shot glass.  This time the burn wasn’t as strong.

The computer interrupted and reported that it had completed the diagnostic and repair procedures.

Sade stood and turned to the computer.  “Where did you get this backup, anyway?” she asked.

“From her,” Karl said.  Sade turned to him, questions in her expression.  “She forked, a few minutes after the shuttle breached the atmosphere.  Opened a narrowcast to one of the frequencies Luke Daniels’ uses for his data vault.”

“The broker?” she asked, recognizing the name.  Daniels was a very successful information dealer, who’d turned a five-kilometer wide hunk of rock in the main asteroid belt into his fortress and his home.  He’d become something of a renegade celebrity.

“That’s the one,” Karl said.

“How did you find that out?”

“Liz.  At the same time she was dumping her backup, she emailed me.” Karl replied.

“Thats,” Liz said, struggling for the words, “just amazing.”

“It was an amazing shock to me,” Karl said, “When we got clear of the jamming belt.”  He paraphrased Liz’s message.

“You should have known she wouldn’t turn on you,” Sade said, scolding him.

“And you should realize how confusing it all was,” Karl said, “I thought, they thought, I’d killed them.  The other me.  The other them.”  He shook his head.  “And then to see the shuttle leave us behind.  Confusing.”

“Then let’s see what she has to say about it,” Sade said, taking the disc with digital Liz out of one port and sliding it into another.  Within seconds, the holographic screen rearranged itself to provide one large display of an empty white virtual construct.  Liz’s face and pixie haircut warbled into solidity.   She looked down, around, then up at them.  And screamed.

by Michael

Closing Out February

February 21, 2011 in Health, Writing by Michael

It’s almost time to kick February to the curb, and move on into spring!  March is just around the corner, with its madness, green beer, and birthday celebration.  I’ll be 47 years old in just a matter of weeks.  That’s an insane number in my perpetually 29 year-old-mind, but I think 47 may be my best year ever.

I weighed in at 232lbs this morning, which is well below my goal for the week.  My blood sugar this morning was at 71, which couldn’t be better.  I’ll be getting a walk in very shortly to ensure those pounds keep falling away as quickly as possible, especially early on in my new regime.  It’s bound to get more difficult to lose as I approach my goal, something I’ll counter-act with increased levels of exercise.  But I’m not going to worry too much about it.  Worrying doesn’t burn off any calories.

As of yesterday, I’ve got about 4.5% of my novel written.  That’s using a very general 100,000 words as a goal length.  The actual length depends more on the story itself.  This is the most I’ve ever written for a long-form project.  Twenty pages of short film script is one thing.  That has a beginning, middle and end.  In my work on The Risk/Reward Matrix, I’ve figured out the basic framework of the story, and am writing front to back at this point.  My focus is on simply getting a first draft done.  It’s like carving a statue out of an enormous block of granite:  Once I get the general shape down, then I can clean up the details and polish the entire work.

The fun thing has been how exciting the writing itself is turning out to be.  As I noted, I have a general sense of how the story goes, but the writing is like reading for me.  In each moment, there’s some new twist or detail I didn’t know, something to alter or adjust the story in a way I didn’t expect.  I know I’m the writer, but it’s more like channeling an inner Stephen King.

Of course, I should be working on that instead of writing this.  My goal has been 1,500 words a day.  I’ve found that’s not very hard for me to achieve in a relatively short period of time.  I’m going to try this week bumping that up to 3,000 words, perhaps in two separate sessions during the day.  I’ve always been a fast writer, when I have a clear line on what I’m trying to say.  So maybe I can be more prolific.  And that wouldn’t suck too much.

So, if you’ll excuse me, I’m going to take a walk and then go to work.  I’ll be back with you later this week.

by Michael

Set Sail on the Website Sea

April 16, 2010 in Writing by Michael

MetheExploraThe history of the Internet is filled with a variety of wild stories and crazy rumors. Heck, the Internet would be pretty much empty without rumor, mistruths, innuendo and vices that will go unnamed here.

But there is some good stuff to be found, if you know where to look. And that’s where I come in. I’m ready to lead you into the great ocean of the information age.

So strap yourselves in and avail yourselves of the free peanuts. We’re going to make three stops on this voyage:

Because I can’t remember much of anything any more, I can highly recommend Memorize Now, a website that can help you remember stuff. For example, I just learned all of the lines of Shakespeare’s Richard III. It wasn’t easy. But… now is the winter of our discontent, made glorious summer by this sun of York.

Five Minute Cake. A String Map. A Snuggie. You can learn to make all of these and so much more, thanks to the geeks of at Instructables.com. They’re snarky folks, but awfully smart. I liked the instructions on how to turn $15 into a pen like the ones that cost $200. Cool, huh?

Finally, Ted.com. I thought this was going to be Ted Danson’s personal site, filled with his snapshots and memories of Cheers. Snap! Wrong! Ted began life more than 25 years ago as a conference about Technology, Entertainment and Design. Now as website, you can watch recorded lectures and performances by a huge variety of people. I gotta bookmark this place and come back later to hear Natalie Merchant singing old poems.

I don’t make this stuff up folks: it comes to me in a box made out of mud and straw. So go out there and enjoy the internet. And make sure to report in any discoveries you make!

by Michael

A Voyage Across the Internet

April 16, 2010 in Writing by Michael

MetheExploraThe history of the Internet is filled with a variety of wild stories and crazy rumors. Heck, the Internet would be pretty much empty without rumor, mistruths, innuendo and vices that will go unnamed here.

But there is some good stuff to be found, if you know where to look. And that’s where I come in. I’m ready to lead you into the great wilderness of the information age.

So strap yourselves in and avail yourselves of the free peanuts. We’re going to make three stops on this voyage:

Learn Something

First stop is Ted.com. I thought this was going to be Ted Danson’s personal site, filled with his snapshots and memories of Cheers. Snap! Wrong! Ted began life more than 25 years ago as a conference about Technology, Entertainment and Design. Now as website, you can watch recorded lectures and performances by a huge variety of people. I gotta bookmark this place and come back later to hear Natalie Merchant singing old poems.

Read Something

There’s a world of the world’s greatest books at Project Gutenberg. Something like 30,000 books are freely and legally available for download in a variety of formats. I just snagged a copy of Antonio Feliciano de Castilho’s A Chave do Enigma in the original Portuguese. Sweet!

Make Something

Five Minute Cake. A String Map. A Snuggie. You can learn to make all of these and so much more, thanks to the geeks of at Instructables.com. They’re snarky folks, but awfully smart. I liked the instructions on how to turn $15 into a pen like the ones that cost $200. Cool, huh?

I don’t make this stuff up folks: it comes to me in a box made out of mud and straw. So go out there and enjoy the internet. And make sure to report in any discoveries you make!

by Michael

Sailing the Seas of the Internet

April 16, 2010 in Writing by Michael

MetheExploraYou can tell by the way I use my voice, I’m a … oh… wait, wrong blog. Today’s blog is about my hobby: Recreating the Historical Voyages of Internet Explorers. That’s right! Every Friday, I put on my best Commodore uniform… no, not The Commodores. Commodore Oliver Hazard Perry. You know, the Hero of Lake Erie? No, huh? Well, more on that in a minute.

As I said, on Fridays I like to re-enact the great voyages into the frontiers of the internet. It’s all been explored before of course. Craig Allen was the first one to get to the end and safely back in 2007.

Today, I headed out to discover something new, and I’ve come back with three things for you.

Why actually leave your house to buy greeting cards, when you can go to enGreet instead? This is a site where you can browse for, choose, sign and send a greeting card. No, I don’t mean by email, I mean by that old fashioned method where they stick stuff in a mailbox or through a door slot! Cool stuff!

If you are planning to get off the couch, maybe you should learn a language. Remedial English might be a good start. But, if you’re set on learning a foreign language, why not try Livemocha. The list of languages available is astounding. The only thing they seem to lack is Klingon!

And finally, for those of you who didn’t know that Oliver Hazard Perry was a Commodore before he was a great big Navy ship, I offer you WikiPedia. If you don’t know it, shame on you. It’s a huge repository of online information that anyone can add to, and everyone can edit. So while there are occasional information vandals, for the most part, you can learn just about anything from the site.

I don’t make this stuff up folks: it comes to me in a box made out of mud and straw. So go out there and enjoy the internet. And make sure to report in any discoveries you make!

by Michael

Adventures on the Internet

April 16, 2010 in Writing by Michael

MetheExploraAs most of you know, I am an adventurer. I come from a long, long line of adventurous folks stretching back to my grandfather Charles who bought a farm in Missouri 75 years ago. Now that was adventure! Of course, there are only two frontiers left to us these days. I can’t afford a ticket to the space station, so I’m stuck exploring the furthest fringes of the internet.

Most of my journeys there are the stuff of legend, best saved for folks with stern constitutions and hearty dispositions.

But I can tell you about today’s exploration. We set sail from our home port shortly after sunrise, heading into calm, charted waters. There, off to the left, was the great Island of Facebook. And just on the horizon at 13 degrees to starboard were the lurking bulwarks of Google. Just before we arrived off the coast of Youtube, we turned hard to port into the part of the map that says “There Be Virii Here.”

Fortunately, no Virii attacked. But I did discover three things that might be of interest to you.

First port of call, Bubble.Us, where I was invited to create a map of my mind. Mind maps, as you know, are a brainstorming tool. You place and connect your ideas, and somehow that tells you what the winning lottery numbers will be. In the image below, a normal mind map is on the left. What I came up with is on the right. Brilliant!

mindmap

Speaking of works of art, Jackson Pollock is a pretty famous art. He made pictures that look a lot like my mind map. Wanna see what it was like to be Jackson Pollock at work? Try this, the Jackson Pollock Simulator. Maybe you can be a master of the abstract form, without getting paint all over yourself!

And finally, because I can’t remember much of anything any more (because of all the paint fumes, I’m sure) I can highly recommend Memorize Now, a website that can help you remember stuff. For example, I just learned all of the lines of Shakespeare’s Richard III. It wasn’t easy. But… now is the winter of our discontent, made glorious summer by this sun of York.

I don’t make this stuff up folks: it comes to me in a box made out of mud and straw. So go out there and enjoy the internet. And make sure to report in any discoveries you make!

by Michael

The Top Three Things I Discovered Today

April 16, 2010 in Writing by Michael

MetheExploraIf you’ve watched the Discovery channel, you may have seen me out in the wilderness, exploring the far ends of the Internet to bring you back stories and useful tips. I’ve struggled through heavy over-coded jungles of HTML and battled javascript with my bare hands. If Discovery doesn’t have a show about my adventures, shame on them!

Anyway, without further ado, here are the Top Three Things I Discovered Today!

First stop… Microsoft. Yes, I know. I’ve heard it all before. But occasionally they do something right, like Windows 7 or the thing I discovered this morning: SkyDrive. It’s a service of Windows Live, so you do have to sign up for that. But SkyDrive gives you 25 gigabytes of free online storage!

I can’t help it, being a man, I forget stuff. Usually stuff my wife has told me to do, which leads to all sorts of trouble. I’ve tried writing notes to myself, but I lose most of them. Especially the ones about things my wife has told me to do. So, along comes Remember the Milk, a web services devoted to helping me remember my to do list. I can get reminders through email and on my cell phone. Which is the same way my wife reminds me of things!

Years ago, I used to fall asleep to music. Then I started buying CDs with an hour of recorded nature sounds: You know the ones, with the sound of the surf at the beach or a jungle at night. But during this morning’s voyages, I discovered Rainy Mood. The website streams a thirty-minute loop of a heavy rain storm. Just the thing to help me drift off to sleep or drown out the drone of the office when I’m on deadline!

I don’t make this stuff up folks: it comes to me in a box made out of mud and straw. So go out there and enjoy the internet. Just make sure your anti-virus is up to date and don’t fall for any spam, hoaxes or Trojan horses!

by Michael

The Story of the Man With The Golden Arm

April 14, 2010 in Writing by Michael

bloodcellBefore we get to the story itself, I thought I’d talk about how you can save some lives.

Chances are very good that at some time in your life, you (or someone you love) will need a transfusion of blood. In fact, according to the American Red Cross, every two seconds, someone in the United States needs blood to stay alive. It’s such a common thing in cases of accidents or surgery, and the need for blood donations has never been higher. One donation can save the lives of up to three people.

Here are three places in Albuquerque where you can donate blood or plasma:

Now, the story of the Man with the Golden Arm:

Australian James Harrison is special. At age 74, he’s donated 984 times since he was 18 years old. And that alone is worthy of mention. But Harrison has a unique blood type that contains a rare antibody. It can be used to save infants born with Rhesus disease. And his donations have kept more than two million babies alive.

Two million!

by Michael

The Wall Returns 30 Years Later

April 13, 2010 in Writing by Michael

220px-Roger Waters 18 May 2008 London O2 ArenaI’m betting this is going to be one of the biggest shows of the year. Roger Waters is bringing The Wall Live to the Pepsi Center on November 23rd. If you’re even remotely aware of Pink Floyd, you’ll already know that The Wall was the group’s 1979 double album.

Waters conceived of the idea in 1977, after completing a tour of large stadiums that left him and the other band members feeling alienated from their audience. Thus the idea of building a wall on stage during the course of a concert.

That was exactly what happened when the band toured to support The Wall in 1980: A forty-foot high wall was built between the band and the audience. At the end, the wall collapses, once again revealing the band.

250px-'The Wall'The show was reborn on July 21st, 1990 on ground that had been part of the Berlin Wall. More than 350,000 thousand people watched the concert in Berlin, and it was broadcast to 52 countries around the world.

On his website, Waters says he was quoted in 1988 talking about the themes of the Wall, asking: “Will the technologies of communication in our culture, serve to enlighten us and help us to understand one another better, or will they deceive us and keep us apart?” Waters says he still thinks the question is very relevant.

Tickets go on sale in May.

by Michael

Don’t Be a Television Zombie

April 13, 2010 in Writing by Michael

If you let it, your television will slowly rot your mind. Although there is no science to back up my claim, my theory is that if you sit in front of a television set 24/7 for the next ten years, you will be a zombie. A very dirty, smelly, emaciated zombie. And that’s really no life to lead, is it?

To avoid such a terrible fate, I suggest you could to the following five things instead of watching television:

zombie bob 47Read a Book

You might be shocked to discover that books still exist. And there are a lot of really good ones to read. They still have libraries where you can check them out for free! Remember libraries? Here’s some bonus fun… read a book to children.

Learn to Play a Music Instrument

Some time ago, my brother decided he was going to learn to play guitar. I thought he was crazy: have you ever seen all the little strings you have to hold down to make it sound right? But he learned, and a few years later, I did too. I’m no Eddie Van Halen, but it’s a lot of fun.

Learn Another Language

Wow your friends and family with your knowledge of a language they can’t speak. Imagine the fun of going to a foreign country and actually being able to talk to the residents in their own language!

Get to Know Your Neighbors

You’ll be surprised how rewarding it can be just to get to know the people you live near. New friends are never a bad thing, especially when they might someday be able to walk your dog when you’re on vacation!

Talk a Walk

You can restore a little sanity to you life by taking a nice long walk in the evening. Look at the stars, walk your dog, stop and smell the flowers. Taking a walk is a wonderful way to wind down your day, not to mention burn off those calories from dessert!

If you didn’t have a television in front of you, how would you fill your time?